My Birthday
I woke up on the 3rd of May, so EXCITED!!! I ran down the corridor and I saw on the couch, a whole bunch of present’s there, It was my birthday, it has finally come, i’ve been counting for weeks now and it’s here all in one couch. I had the whole day planned. Movie’s, Pool’s, Portal 2 and Minecraft, just me and my best friend.
I opened my presents and got ready quickly, then we went to pick up bryn.
I went to Bryn’s house and we got in the car and off we go to get Sushi, and to the cinemas to watch The Amazing Spider Man 2 in 3d!!!
When we got our sushi and hided it in my sister’s bag, and went into the Cinemas Theatre, When the movie was on we got the sushi out, no one saw us but i’m pretty sure the other people could smell us.
We smelt a bit fishy but I think the other people just got over it.
When the movie was finished, I walked out the theatre feeling Like I have thousand’s of Spider Man’s webs all over me (cause of the 3d glasses)!
When we got out the whole Cinema Gold, we got in the car and off we go to the Onikawa Pool’s.
We turned up at The Okinawa Pool’s all prepared and ready to get Splashed.
Bryn and I went straight to the slide’s and we had lots of races until we got tired.
The slide’s line was pretty long so sometimes we would both jump in the pool
and every 2 minutes we would look up and see if the line was short,
We did that for a long time .
We were there for about 4 hours, we wanted to stay longer but the pool’s closed at 6pm.
Just before we got dressed and left we went in the spa,
and then we left to go home!!!
We got home, got our laptop’s and ran straight to the couch.
When we were on our laptops we had to stop to get all our stuff ready for the night, we slept in the room beside the swinging chair and we got our sleeping bags, torches and laptop’s.
We were on our laptop’s most of the night playing Minecraft and Portal 2 , after we got off our Laptop’s we were just playing with the torches all night.
Great writing you could have used a diffident color i was a bit hard to read and i like how you said that you where a bit fishy.
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